Extraordinary Drawings [ First Attempt ]

First go at an extraordinary drawing that speaks about a specific quality of my addition to the columbarium.

The drawing is a section perspective that is meant to show the special view of the columbarium from the entrance carved into the fragments of the addition. The drawing also shows the spatial qualities of the fragments along with the carved space below.

Although I believe the drawing worked in some regards, I am not pleased with it entirely and will end up re doing it for the final in a few weeks

Extraordinary Drawing Inspiration

To show spacial qualities of each of my buildings in relation to the columbarium, I want to make a section perspective that has collage aspects to it

Here are some drawings I would like to draw inspiration from

Last semester I collaged a perspective for my visual arts center (below) so I would again like to incorporate this into the extraordinary drawing

What I explored was the position of the pieces I have created and some more possibilities that were brought up in the critique yesterday.

The first deals with the idea of keeping the pieces horizontal to match the diagram I have of the columbarium. What I see with this is that the pieces now start to line up better with the columbarium. Also the horizontal pieces deal with the pedestrian path from the side and by shifting the bottom piece it creates and entrance from the bottom

The second attempts to keep the vertical pieces but work better with the issues of movement brought up yesterday. I also rearranged the pieces to create different spaces

From here I want to explore cutting the voids out. I think that I should try to translate the void of the columbarium more literally