Extraordinary Drawings [ First Attempt ]

First go at an extraordinary drawing that speaks about a specific quality of my addition to the columbarium.

The drawing is a section perspective that is meant to show the special view of the columbarium from the entrance carved into the fragments of the addition. The drawing also shows the spatial qualities of the fragments along with the carved space below.

Although I believe the drawing worked in some regards, I am not pleased with it entirely and will end up re doing it for the final in a few weeks